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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ CVE-2023-33381: OS command injection on MitraStar GPT-2741GNAC
 ### Firmware Version: AR_g5.8_110WVN0b7_2
 ### Vulnerability Description:
 
-When logging in via SSH, it was apparent that one would be directed to a restricted shell instead of the expected full shell access.
+Upon logging in via SSH, I immediately noticed the limited set of available commands and options. It became evident that I was indeed confined to a restricted shell environment.
 ![image](https://github.com/duality084/CVE-2023-33381-MitraStar-GPT-2741GNAC/assets/7117259/b5840811-334d-45d5-b3e3-7863969165a3)
 
 After exploring several known vulnerabilities, I decided to delve into the search for new ones. To begin, I logged into the administrative portal and began testing various functionalities that could potentially result in OS command injection. Within the Diagnostic menu, I came across a particular feature that allowed me to test connectivity using the ping and traceroute commands.